Update braid-text readme

braid-text-server/readme.md

@@ -34,21 +34,21 @@ server.on("request", (req, res) => {
 
 ## Run the Demo
 
-This demo will run a collaboratively-editable wiki:
+This will run a collaboratively-editable wiki:
 
 ```shell
 npm install
 node server-demo.js
 ```
 
-Now you can open these URLs in browser:
+Now open these URLs in your browser:
   - http://localhost:8888/demo (to see the demo text)
   - http://localhost:8888/demo?editor (to edit the text)
   - http://localhost:8888/demo?markdown-editor (to edit it as markdown)
 
 Or try opening the URL in [Braid-Chrome](https://github.com/braid-org/braid-chrome), or another Braid client, to edit it directly!
 
-Check out the `server-demo.js` file to see examples for how to add access control, and a `/pages` endpoint to show all the currently used `key`s.
+Check out the `server-demo.js` file to see examples for how to add access control, and a `/pages` endpoint to show all the edited pages.
 
 ## API